Today in class we talked about "meaningful dialogue." We looked and discussed how dialogue in a flat scene is not clear, and then looked and discussed how dialogue in a dynamic scene adds to the story to enhance it. Here is the sheet we used for this:
I also showed you a clip from Harry Potter that shows the important elements of a scene from the paper above:
Then you went back to your desks and added "meaningful dialogue" to your story. You were to use green text to show that you have made changes to your story.
Have fun with this!!!!
HOMEWORK AND CLASSWORK:
1. Read and record your title, minutes and pages.
2. Add dialogue into your story and use green text.
Have a great evening,