Today in class we talked about how to make a scene in your story come from 2D to 3D, and how to add tension to this scene. Here are the examples I used in class. Click on the link to view.
Some students were not even done writing their draft that was due last week. So, they had to start there first.
Be sure your entire completed essay is in Times New Roman font size 14.
Next, you are are to pick a scene in your story you want to improve. Then highlight that scene and put it in italics. Right under that scene in purple text, you are to write your new scene making sure it is 3D and has added tension.
1. Read and record your title, pages and minutes.
2. Complete your scene that your are improving with 3D and tension.
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